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the imitation of preceding models, revolts against them all, and determines, at any rate, to be original, nothing can be expected but an awkward straining in every thing; improper method, forced conceits, and affected expression, are the certain issue of such obstinacy: the business is to be unlike; and this he may very possibly be, but at the expence of graceful of graceful ease and true beauty; for he puts himself, at best, into a forced, unnatural state; and it is well if he be not forced, beside his purpose, to leave common sense, as well as good models, behind him, like one who would break loose from an impediment which holds him fast; the very endeavour to get clear throws him into uneasy attitudes and violent contortions; and if he gain his liberty at last, it is by an effort which carries him much further than the point he would wish to stop at."

Discourse on Poetic Imitation, Hurd's

Horace, Vol. 3, P. 107, 4th Ed. 1766. This gentleman's first wish seems to have been to avoid the imputation of being the servile imitator of Mr. Garrick; but from all I have been able to learn of that great actor, whom I had not the felicity of seeing more than once, I am persuaded, that

"To copy nature, were to copy him." LORD CHEDWORTH.

48. "Indeed, indeed, sirs," &c.

The repetition of "indeed" incumbers the verse, and is not in the quarto, which runs thus:

"To let you know of it."

Ham. ""

Indeed, sirs, but

"This troubles me :-hold you the watch to-night?"

And again:

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My lord, from head to foot."

The words " my lord" only load the mea

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This repetition of “ very like," which encumbers the line, is not in the quarto. We should, perhaps, read:

Hor. "It would have much amaz'd you."

Ham. "

Hor. "

Very like:

"Did it stay long?"

While one with moderate haste

"Might tell a hundred."

Mar. & Ber.
Ber. "Longer, longer."

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I cannot understand this otherwise than as the eruption of a mind in part distracted; it is something between a remark and a question; I would point it thus: "His beard-was—grizzled-no." 50. "Your loves, as mine to you: Farewell."

This line is deficient by a foot-we might easily repair it:

"Your loves, as mine to you: So fare you well."

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My father's spirit in arms!" &c.

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The prodigy was his father's spirit "in arms, was a circumstance, but a circumstance so important, as fully to justify Mr. Whalley's reading: My father's spirit! in arms!"

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SCENE III.

-The youth of primy nature."

The early days of manhood.

B. STRUTT.

"Forward, not permanent, sweet, not lasting."

The sense and the metre both require the conjunction though before "sweet."

53. "Whereof he is the head; then if he says he loves you."

The redundancy here might easily be avoided: "Whereof he's head; then if he says," &c. His unmaster'd importunity."

"Unmaster'd," says Dr. Johnson, is "licentious." And so it often is; but here, I believe, it only means, not kept in subjection by the austere virtue of Ophelia.

54. "Whilst, like a puft and reckless libertine." The quarto reads, "Whiles a puft," &c. Perhaps:

"While as a puft and reckless libertine."

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The relative here does not agree with its antecedent "Pastors." We might read:

Thyself the primrose path of dalliance tread'st, "And reck'st not thine own read."

55. A double blessing is a double grace."

I cannot perceive the meaning here of "blessing," as opposed to "grace." Mr. Capel Lofft thinks it signifies-is doubly entitled to our gratitude.

"Give thy thoughts no tongue,” &c.

This may remind us of the celebrated advice which Sir Henry Wotton, in his letter to Milton, says was given by Alberto Scipione, an old Roman courtier, "I pensieri stretti, ed it Viso Sciolto," i. e. (as Sir Henry Wotton translates it) your thoughts close, and your countenance loose, will go all over the world. LORD CHEDWORTH. "Nor any unproportion'd thought, his act."

A thought not formed according to the measure of honour and propriety.

"Nor any unproportioned thought," &c. Vera numerosque modosque vitæ.

CAPEL LOFFT.

"The friends thou hast, and their adoption

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tried,

Grapple them to thy soul with hoops of steel."

We might read more correctly, ejecting the double accusative,

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Grapple unto thy soul," &c.

"Hast" is not habes, but the auxiliary verbthe friends whom, and the adoption of them, thou hast tried and proved.

56. "

Do not dull thy palm with enter

tainment."

The same thought occurs in Cymbeline:

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- Join gripes with hands

"Made hard with hourly falshood."

And again in the last act of this play,

"The hand of little employment hath the daintier sense."

"Of each new-hatch'd, unfledg'd comrade. Be

ware."

"Comrade" has the same accentuation in other places-as in the First Part of King Henry the Fourth:

Prince of Wales

"And his comrádes, that daff the world aside."

"Bear it that the opposer may beware of thee."

Sustain, support it.

This line in the quarto is properly pointed : "Bear't, that th' opposer may beware of thee." My blessing season this in thee."

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Season," here, though it certainly exceeds the sense annexed to it by Dr. Warburton, will hardly extend to what Dr. Johnson states. It is, I believe, only "make durable-qualify to

last."

Yourself shall keep the key of it."

I believe the meaning is, Your precepts are stored in my memory; and there they shall remain sacred, until you yourself shall absolve me from the duty of observing them.

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