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As sparrows, eagles; or the hare, the lion.
If I say sooth, I must report they were

As cannons overcharg'd with double cracks';
So they

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Doubly redoubled strokes upon the foe:

the verse, has been omitted in the old copy. Sir T. Hanmer reads

"Our captains, brave Macbeth," &c. STEEVENS. The word [as Mr. Douce has observed,] was probably pronounced capitaine in this instance, as it is frequently in Spenser. BOSWELL.

• As cannons overcharg'd with double cracks, &c.] That is, with double charges; a metonymy of the effect for the cause. НЕАТН. Mr. Theobald has endeavoured to improve the sense of this passage, by altering the punctuation thus:

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they were

"As cannons overcharg'd; with double cracks

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So they redoubled strokes.”

He declares, with some degree of exultation, that he has no idea of a "cannon charged with double cracks;" but surely the great author will not gain much by an alteration which makes him say of a hero, that he "redoubles strokes with double cracks," an expression not more loudly to be applauded, or more easily pardoned, than that which is rejected in its favour.

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That a 66 cannon is charged with thunder," or with double thunders," may be written, not only without nonsense, but with elegance, and nothing else is here meant by cracks, which, in the time of this writer, was a word of such emphasis and dignity, that in this play he terms the general dissolution of nature the crack of doom. JOHNSON.

Crack is used on a similar occasion by Barnaby Googe, in his Cupido Conquered, 1563:

"The canon's cracke begins to roore
“And darts full thycke they fiye,

"And cover'd thycke the armyes both,
"And framde a counter-skye."

Barbour, the old Scotch Poet, calls fire-arms-" crakys of war."

STEEVENS.

Again, in the old play of King John, 1591, and applied, as here, to ordnance :

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as harmless and without effect,

"As is the echo of a cannon's crack." MALONE.

5 Doubly redoubled strokes, &c.] So, in King Richard II. :

Except they meant to bathe in reeking wounds,
Or memorize another Golgotha",

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But I am faint, my gashes cry for help.

DUN. So well thy words become thee, as thy wounds;

They smack of honour both :-Go, get him sur[Exit Soldier, attended.

geons.

Enter RossE”.

Who comes here?

"And let thy blows, doubly redoubled,

"Fall," &c.

The irregularity of the metre, however, induces me to believe our author wrote

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they were

"As cannons overcharg'd with double cracks,
"Doubly redoubling strokes upon the foe."

For this thought, however, Shakspeare might have been indebted to Caxton's Recuyel, &c. "The batayll was sharp, than the grekes dowblid and redowblid their strokes, &c. STEEVENS.

6 Or MEMORIZE another Golgotha,] That is, or make another Golgotha, which should be celebrated and delivered down to posterity, with as frequent mention as the first. HEATH.

The word memorize, which some suppose to have been coined by Shakspeare, is used by Spenser, in a sonnet to Lord Buckhurst, prefixed to his Pastorals, 1579:

"In vaine I thinke, right honourable lord,

"By this rude rime to memorize thy name." T. WARTON. The word is likewise used by Drayton; and by Chapman, in his translation of the second book of Homer, 1598:

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—which let thy thoughts be sure to memorize."

Again, in the third Iliad:

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and Clymene, whom fame

"Hath, for her fair eyes, memoriz'd."

And again, in a copy of verses prefixed to Sir Arthur Gorges's translation of Lucan, 1614:

"Of them whose acts they mean to memorize.”

STEEVENS.

7 Enter Rosse.] The old copy-"Enter Rosse and Angus:" but as only the name of Rosse is spoken to, or speaks any thing in the remaining part of this scene, and as Duncan expresses himself in the singular number,

MAL.

The worthy thane of Rosse.

LEN. What a haste looks through his eyes! So should he look,

That seems to speak things strange.

"Whence cam'st thou, worthy thane?"

Angus may be considered as a superfluous character. Had his present appearance been designed, the King would naturally have taken some notice of him. STEEVENS.

It is clear, from a subsequent passage, that the entry of Angus was here designed; for in Scene III. he again enters with Rosse, and says,

. We are sent

"To give thee from our royal master thanks." MALONE. Because Rosse and Angus accompany each other in a subsequent scene, does it follow that they make their entrance together on the present occasion? STeevens.

8 Who comes HERE?] The latter word is here employed as a dissyllable. MALONE.

Mr. Malone has already directed us to read there as a dissyllable, but without supporting his direction by one example of such a practice.

I suspect that the poet wrote

"Who is't comes here?" or "But who comes here?" STEEVENS.

See the Essay on Shakspeare's Versification. BoSWELL.

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So should he look,

That SEEMS to speak things strange.] The meaning of this passage, as it now stands, is, "so should he look, that looks as if he told things strange." But Rosse neither yet told strange things, nor could look as if he told them. Lenox only conjectured from his air that he had strange things to tell, and therefore undoubtedly said:

"What a haste looks through his eyes!

"So should he look, that teems to speak things strange." He looks like one that is big with something of importance; a metaphor so natural that it is every day used in common discourse. JOHNSON.

"So

Mr. M. Mason observes, that the meaning of Lenox is, should he look, who seems as if he had strange things to speak." The following passage in The Tempest seems to afford no unapt comment upon this:

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pr'ythee, say on:

"The setting of thine eye and cheek proclaim

"A matter from thee-."

Again, in King Richard II. :

ROSSE.

God save the king!

DUN. Whence cam'st thou, worthy thane ?

From Fife, great king.

Rosse.
Where the Norweyan banners flout the sky'
And fan our people cold".

"Men judge by the complexion of the sky, &c.

"So may you, by my dull and heavy eye,

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'My tongue hath but a heavier tale to say." STEEVENS. "That seems to speak things strange." i. e. that seems about to speak strange things. Our author himself furnishes us with the best comment on this passage. In Antony and Cleopatra we meet with nearly the same idea:

"The business of this man looks out of him." MALONE. I-FLOUT the sky,] The banners may be poetically described as waving in mockery or defiance of the sky. So, in King Edward III. 1599:

"And new replenish'd pendants cuff the air,

"And beat the wind, that for their gaudiness
Struggles to kiss them." STEEVENS.

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Again, in King John:

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Mocking the air, with colours idly spread."

This passage has perhaps been misunderstood. The meaning seems to be, not that the Norweyan banners proudly insulted the sky; but that, the standards being taken by Duncan's forces, and fixed in the ground, the colours idly flapped about, serving only to cool the conquerors, instead of being proudly displayed by their former possessors. The line in King John, therefore, is the most perfect comment on this. MALONE.

The sense of the passage, collectively taken, is this: "Where the triumphant flutter of the Norweyan standards ventilates or cools the soldiers who had been heated through their efforts to secure such numerous trophies of victory." STEEVENS.

In Marston's Sophonisba, published in 1606, the second scene of the first act bears a great resemblance to the one now before us, and that which precedes it: "Carthelo enters, his sword drawne, his body wounded, his shield strucke full of darts." He gives an account of a battle between the Carthaginians and Romans, and this passage occurs:

"When we the campe that lay at Utica,

"From Carthage distant but five easie leagues,

"Descride, from of the watch three hundred saile,
Upon whose tops the Roman eagles streach'd

"Their large spread winges which fan'd the evening ayre
"To us cold breath, for well we might discerne

"Rome swam to Carthage." BOSWELL.

Norway himself, with terrible numbers,
Assisted by that most disloyal traitor

The thane of Cawdor, 'gan a dismal conflict:
Till that Bellona's bridegroom, lapp'd in proof3,
Confronted him with self-comparisons *,

Point against point rebellious, arm 'gainst arm,
Curbing his lavish spirit: And, to conclude,
The victory fell on us ;——

DUN.

ROSSE. That now

Great happiness!

2 And fan our people cold.] In all probability, some words that rendered this a complete verse have been omitted; a loss more frequently to be deplored in the present tragedy, than perhaps in any other of Shakspeare. STEEVENS.

3 Till that Bellona's BRIDEGROOM, lapp'd IN PROOF,] This passage may be added to the many others, which show how little Shakspeare knew of ancient mythology. HENLEY.

Our author might have been influenced by Holinshed, who, p. 567, speaking of King Henry V. says: "He declared that the goddesse of battell, called Bellona," &c. &c. Shakspeare, therefore, hastily concluded that the Goddess of War was wife to the God of it; or might have been misled by Chapman's version of a line in the fifth Iliad of Homer:

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Mars himself, match'd with his female mate, "The dread Bellona—.'

Lapp'd in proof, is, defended by armour of proof.

STEEVENS.

These criticisms are entirely founded in error. "Bellona's bridegroom," as Mr. Kemble and Mr. Douce have observed, does not mean the God of War, but Macbeth. So, in the scene quoted above, Marston's Sophonisba :

"Scipio advanced like the God of blood,

"Leads up grim war." Boswell.

4 Confronted HIM with self-comparisons,] By him, in this verse, is meant Norway; as the plain construction of the English requires. And the assistance the thane of Cawdor had given Norway, was underhand; (which Rosse and Angus, indeed, had discovered, but was unknown to Macbeth ;) Cawdor being in the court all this while, as appears from Angus's speech to Macbeth, when he meets him to salute him with the title, and insinuates his crime to be" lining the rebel with hidden help and 'vantage."

"with self-comparisons." i. e. gave him as good as he brought, shew'd he was his equal. WARBURTON.

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